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diff --git a/share/menu.yaml b/share/menu.yaml
index 248592b..9735aec 100644
--- a/share/menu.yaml
+++ b/share/menu.yaml
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# Copyright (c) 2004-2014 Jeremy Stanley <fungi@yuggoth.org>. Permission
+# Copyright (c) 2004-2016 Jeremy Stanley <fungi@yuggoth.org>. Permission
 # to use, copy, modify, and distribute this software is granted under
 # terms provided in the LICENSE file distributed with this software.
 
@@ -40,8 +40,8 @@ menu:choose_gender:
     branch: choose_name
     choice_f: female
     choice_m: male
-    description: First, your new avatar needs a gender. In the world of Example, all avatars are either male or female.
-    prompt: "Pick a gender for your new avatar:"
+    description: First, your new avatar needs a birth gender. Avatars are one of male or female at birth.
+    prompt: "Pick a birth gender for your new avatar:"
 
 menu:choose_name:
     action: user.avatar.set("name", user.menu_choices[choice])
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ menu:choose_name:
     create_6: random_name()
     create_7: random_name()
     default: g
-    description: Your new avatar needs a name. This will be the name with which $(tpsp) grew up, and will initially be the name by which $(tpsp) is known in the world of Example. There are ways for your new avatar to make a name for $(tpop)self over time, so $(tpsp) won't be stuck going by such an unremarkable name forever.
+    description: Your new avatar needs a name. This will be the name with which $(tpsp) grew up, and will initially be the name by which $(tpsp) is known to others. There are ways for your new avatar to make a name for $(tpop)self over time, so $(tpsp) won't be stuck going by such an unremarkable name forever.
     prompt: "Choose a name for $(tpop):"
 
 menu:delete_account:
@@ -109,12 +109,12 @@ menu:main_utility:
     choice_a: awaken an existing avatar
     choice_c: create a new avatar
     choice_d: delete an unwanted avatar
-    choice_l: leave example for now
+    choice_l: leave for now
     choice_p: permanently remove your account
     demand_a: user.account.get("avatars")
-    demand_c: len(user.account.get("avatars")) < universe.categories["internal"]["limits"].get("max_avatars")
+    demand_c: len(user.account.get("avatars")) < universe.contents["mudpy.limit"].get("avatars")
     demand_d: user.account.get("avatars")
-    description: $(red)$(inc:banner.txt)$(nrm)$(eol)$(eol)From here you can awaken, create and delete avatars. An avatar is your persona in the world of Example. You can also leave or permanently delete your account.
+    description: $(red)$(inc:banner.txt)$(nrm)$(eol)$(eol)From here you can awaken, create and delete avatars. An avatar is your persona in the World. You can also leave or permanently delete your account.
     prompt: What would you like to do?
 
 menu:verifying_new_password: